“Silent LOVE…” – $Journey & Beyond

Before I start writing about the journey of Silent Love, I would like to thank each and every one of you for making this success. It is because of your valuable time that you have taken out from you busy schedule,  I was able to achieve this.

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After my first story Shadow of Truth, I thought of coming with a whole new different concept. And then I thought about writing a love story as people easily get connected when its love story. But then I decided not to come up a routine kind of love story. I wanted to write about not just love. I had thoughts of explaining how a relation should be especially between opposite gender of teenage group. I wanted to express various feelings of relation and also how tough is to maintain a relation. Every one speaks about love. But then I wanted to present a different kind of relation that is not just love but also has various other feelings embedded in it. Here if you see, in this story, you can see a relation between mom and son, father and daughter, two friends and especially Prudhvi who likes a girl but then he never answers himself that it is Love. Every relation has love in it that doesn’t mean that we name it as LOVE. And also one most important message I wanted to convey to girls is that if a boy is running back of them, it doesn’t mean that he is in love with her and marriage and all. May be he wanted to be a good friend, a special friend as like Prudhvi.

I hope I have clearly conveyed what I exactly felt. When ever I used to write a post and read it, I used to read it several times to make sure that the narration has liveliness in it and also it is connecting the readers and making them feel that they are not just reading story and that the characters are playing around them. I want to understand whether I have achieved it, in your words. Here are some most wonderful comments that I have received from readers.

1. In one post I have explained about relation between two people should be like a bird and a nest and not like a bird and a cage. One person from hyderabad replied to that saying that he did a mistake in his real life and now he learnt how to be in a realtion. I felt really amazing when I read that. People are not just reading, they are connecting it to their real life.

2. One reader sent me a mail as like this. “Hi Venky, I don’t know what is driving you to writing stories. But I wanted to request you to please write it for me. Narration in your stories is so good that it makes me forget myself.” You can imagine how high I would have flied when I read this.

3. Some readers said that they never read any story or book till now but then after reading two posts of my story, they started reading the story and waited very much eagerly for the next episodes.

4. For the climax episode, one reader said that she had tears in her eyes when she read the following lines. “Things that we want, things we feel we will be happy with, things we feel that are good to us, don’t come to us easily and immediately. All we have to do is to wait for them and when we are true in our heart, they will definitely come to us.”

5. “A very proud reader and a very proud friend. Just keep writing. The least I will say to you. what an explanation. Awesome. Simple superb. Please do start writing articles or blogs related to daily or important news.” This is one of the amazing mail I have received.

There are readers who wait eagerly for my post even in their work hours. There are readers who play trick with their team leads by converting the post into a pdf and reading it. There are readers who are first time readers of stories/novels. As like the above said 5 stories, I wanted to know what’s your take from this story and your experience. Please post it in the comment section.

All your feedbacks/comments encourage me a lot and add value to my writings. They help me a lot in improving my writings as they make me understand how well the writings are reaching the readers hearts. So, please please reply with a comment for every post you read. It may be a comment or a suggestion or anything. I am ready to accept it and work on it.

On this special occasion, I want to especially thank my reviewers Lakshmi Prasanna and Moorthy kritiga for taking time from their busy schedule and helping me in correcting the mistakes in the blog and also motivating me to write it in a better way. They also play a very important role in pushing me to write. Thank you guys.

If any one is interested in being part of my team, you are welcome. You can help me in many ways.

I will keep writing new kind of stories with new concepts that can invoke a changing thought in the society which is the base theme of my writing. Your valuable and true feedback will help me in improving my writings.

1. What’s your first impression?

2. Are the characters realistic?

3. Is the narration making u feel the story and characters lively?

4. What’s the unique thing u have noticed?

5. Is the relation between people explained clearly?

6. What is the one thing u suggest me to change in the writings?

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Next Story: As I have already specified in my previous blog posts that I will come up with “I quiT”, I also have another plot which is titled “I Am Stupid.” Within a few days, I will come up with either one of them.

A heartfull thanks to each of you.

“To write is to express, to read is to feel.”

Author: Mr. Venky Bond

“Silent LOVE…” – $7

In one pic, she is standing at the center in the 2nd row, whereas in the other pic she is at the corner and someone is holding her hand. This seems like she is forcedly dragged into the 2nd pic. Just to reduce the number of locations I need to work on, I increased the probability that she belongs to team A.

Now, I have to find out the team details and then trace out her.

I can continue this tracing only from the office as I need to have access to the Employee details server. So, it’s time for me to sleep now.

Ooo. Wait wait wait. I completely forgot calling Suchi from last 2 days. One more day if I continue this, then her reaction will be more violent. I immediately picked up the call and dialed her number.

“Hello Suchi.”

“…” – no response from the other side

“Helloo….”

“Helloo…”

“Suchi. Look, I am really sorry for not calling. Yesterday I was completely busy at M&G day and reached late to hostel and so couldn’t call you.”

“Hmmm. Okay. How are you?” – Suchi.

“I am fine Suchi. How about you? Had dinner?”

“Ya I am fine. Over Prudhvi. What about you?”

“Ya long back Suchi.”

“Okay. So, how is everything going on there?”

“Things are going on well Suchi. Started liking it.”

“Whom?”

“What whom?”

“You said right you started liking?”

“Suchi… I am saying about the surrounding and work. Not a person. Okay.”

“Hmm. I am believing.”

“Suchi…”

“Okay okay. I am just kidding. So, did you make any friends there?”

“Not yet Suchi. Just started conversing with few people. Hopefully will get to know more people.”

“Okay Prudhvi.”

Our conversation continued for almost 40 minutes and then I went to bed.

(Gooooooood Morning)

Friday, fun day and most importantly, No-Formals day. Just go as the way you want to go. I woke up, got ready and reached office earlier than my regular time.

When I started asking question why am I working this hard to trace her, the answer is nothing.

As of now I don’t have any answer for this question. The only thing that’s in driving me is that. I was attracted to her smile which made me to spell out a poem all of a sudden on the stage in front of a large crowd and so I want to see that smile again and meet her. This is the only thing which is running in my mind.

(At office)

Now, there are two approaches I need to follow.

  1. To make an assumption that she belongs to Team B and proceed with digging the details of that team.
  2. Or to assume that she belongs to both the teams and find the common names of both the teams and dig those details.

Whatever it is, at the end I have to find her and I don’t want to take much more time to do it.

Going with one single approach may or may not lead results and so I decided to sail in both boats. Out of these two, I first started working with approach 2.

As I have access to the entire information with regard to M&G day, I pulled out the team information documents and have extracted the details of the two teams of whose pics I have with me. Rounded all the common people appearing in both the pics and also the repeating names in the team details list.

There are 3 people who are in both the pictures but then only two names are repeating in the names list. It’s creating lot of confusion. But the luckiest part is that out of that only one is feminine gender.

“Savitha…”

Looks like a North Indian name. But she looked like Anyway, let’s not come to any kind of conclusion. I have one more approach to follow. Let’s see what kind of results that will lead to.

(The other approach)

As per the way she is standing in both the pics, I made an assumption that she belongs to team B. Now, I have to go through the details of each and every name. Let me try limiting out the names.

There are a total of 27 people in this list and out of which 13 are women. So, now I just have to get the details of these 13 people.

Okay, I guess I am almost there. All I have to do is to get the information of each person and find out who she is. How am I going to do it? From where will I get the profiles of employees?

I started looking for all the intranet services that are available. There are almost 279 intranet services and there is no way I am going to work on each item. I guess I have to try out some matching criteria. As I am looking for employee profiles, the service name should be relevant to that.

(29 mins later)

Finally, I found out that there is a service called KnowMore which is basically a place where all the employees profiles information will be available with minimum public information like name, location, project and such.

But then this is pretty much like employee ID based. But, what I have with me is a list of 13 names. Oh wait wait wait. wow. There is a search option where I can search with name and get employee ID.

I just tried with one name.

“Swetha” and pressed the enter key.

No, No, No. The search resulted with 17 matches. Now I have to go through all the 17 ID’s and see if the profile is matching with the team information. But then there is no way I am going to sit and do this for the entire list.

This is a heavy time taking process and I am not doing it now. Let me look at it post lunch or in the evening. It’s now time to get back to work.

@ “I never thought that I have to swim the entire ocean to find one single pearl.” – Mr. Venky Bond